I think it would have been better if the subbass didn't wobble as much and was more persistent. However I like the melody you develop! All together I think the song is too simple however, In the majority of the song it alternates from just 1 bass track to a swell and to me it gets really repetitive.
I'm going to subscribe to you, I want to see what you can do next!
you are pretty good for 13! You should try and equalize a bit, the explosions are waaay to loud and ear piercing, which is never good. If this is all your original work I can see you going places!
However, I don't consider myself an expert on dubstep xD hopefully somebody that does will review your song a little better than I did. Keep up the good work!
Woah, this has got some funk! The only thing you are missing is a great wet bass! You should probably come back to this and clean it up and add something more, because as much as I love it, it gets a little repetitive at times.
Keep up the good work! PM me once your next song comes out, especially if it is as good as this!
hey thanks! i really appreciate it! i have been thinking of redoing this myself, kinda feels like i could do more. but i'll PM you the next song i post. XD
I, I don't even know what to...
Bravo, Bravo good sir!
Ah yes. Art isn't it? Thanks for the feedback. And if you can, I'd appreciate it if you would listen to some of my other, more serious songs. This was a joke :)
I mostly agree with MilkyChocolate.
But I do disagree when he says it lacks structure. I feel like it's more of an ambient song and in that area I feel this song suceeds.
Like Chelnov said it's a really nice song! I do think the Pad gets a little overpowering at 0 :34 - 1:06. It's very calm and really quite lovely. I'm definitely going to pass this song amongst my friends, I think they'll like it.
I do agree that the first drone was too loud. I turned it down after my friend recorded lyrics for this.
It sounds really strange in the beginning to me (sounds like a different time signiture) but it really starts to pull together with the drums. I grew to like the design near the end but the main piano-synth got a little too repetitive for me. I think you achieved what you were trying to do though, and I like it a lot.
I really like the progressive house style you have going in the beginning. That panning synth is pretty funky, I like it. After a while it gets a little too repetitive though, around the 2 minute mark for me, try switching it up a bit or add/take away elements.
It fits really well with the lyrics though. It has to be said though, I really like what you did at 3:20 and on. It really seems to pick up there and it's really nice sounding. Good work :)
thank you soooo much for the feedback! i took all that into account
Wow this song reminds me of a game I used to play a long time ago. I really like it.
I do feel the transition at 1:34 is way to abrupt however. Otherwise, a really great song, keep it up. :)
thanks for listening.
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