I like how the beginning cuts out. And good job on the panning, it does well to immerse you in the song. However at times there is some dissonance, so I would try and keep the notes working together. You did do well keeping it serious, though and that is good. I feel it is missing something, like the song is being held back.
You did a very nice job on it though! I look forward to more!
thanks, i was kinda thinking it was missing something as well. but i'm glad you like it.
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Nice! I really like this one. I think it would have been better if you spent more time developing the melody in the beginning. Also, the audio clips were great, but it could be improved if you added stuttering to the voice, where in certain parts his voice would stutter with the wobble bass. (I recognize his voice, is that Nova? I used to watch his Happy Wheels series.)
Wow, Thanks for the detailed response! And thanks for the feedback. I'll keep it all in mind for when I start another song. And yup, that's Nova.
Wow I really like this! I'm actually going to be getting that anime and watching it soon so I can't wait to compare this song to the original!
I really like it, this is something I could listen to all day, and I have added it to my music library! :D
Also for some reason I really like the portion with the slight dissonance, it still feels right and makes the whole song seem to fit all together a little bit more. Keep up the good work, I really enjoy this!
Thanks a lot mate!
Lovely review! :D
Woah, this has got some funk! The only thing you are missing is a great wet bass! You should probably come back to this and clean it up and add something more, because as much as I love it, it gets a little repetitive at times.
Keep up the good work! PM me once your next song comes out, especially if it is as good as this!
hey thanks! i really appreciate it! i have been thinking of redoing this myself, kinda feels like i could do more. but i'll PM you the next song i post. XD
I, I don't even know what to...
Bravo, Bravo good sir!
Ah yes. Art isn't it? Thanks for the feedback. And if you can, I'd appreciate it if you would listen to some of my other, more serious songs. This was a joke :)
Like Chelnov said it's a really nice song! I do think the Pad gets a little overpowering at 0 :34 - 1:06. It's very calm and really quite lovely. I'm definitely going to pass this song amongst my friends, I think they'll like it.
I do agree that the first drone was too loud. I turned it down after my friend recorded lyrics for this.
Wow this song reminds me of a game I used to play a long time ago. I really like it.
I do feel the transition at 1:34 is way to abrupt however. Otherwise, a really great song, keep it up. :)
thanks for listening.
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